trinity aana

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Tropical.....Rain - Poem by trinity aana

dense proliferating cool as in hot can be
not a sun beam for months augmented
the rotten leaves beneath
smouldering, nauseatingly sweet, choking
steam rising from the ground
dizziness vertigo centralising the system
moths hover centipedes crawl
A widow giant black spinning silky lacey noose
relishing newly acquired widowhood, saintly
eternally, calmly, lounging impartible for another
till then lonely.lonesome, alone conjuring............

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  • (10/30/2006 6:21:00 AM)

    This is an amazing piece... you do have a distintive style. The way you express makes the blood vessels rush. Indeed - the emotions float up on the screen as your words on this page.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 19, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010

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