a life gone by.....suspectedly self sustaining
it ignited self.....self immolating
courageously it pass itself by..............
its another life....time.....
it is now ethereal,
it is now ephemeral
it is now euphoric
life after life, a span of a rainbow,
its a, , , shipwreck of a life time,
we are gona swim out, , , , riding on the sea waves,
waves lashed high and might...........rocked the ship
surf the same waves, , , , , , current under our feet.......buoyant
swim ashore..........wonderland.........
this is my Utopia...............my after life........another........time...
diffucult subject, , , , utopia and afterlife, , wrtten well
ethereal.., ephemeral.., euphoric.., this alliterative diction has made the theme interesting, although the subject being too philosophical. a truely utopic kind.., well written.
life after life, a span of a rainbow, its a, , , shipwreck of a life time, we are gona swim out, , , , riding on the sea waves love and snickers in real life and more...swim ashore..........wonderland.........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A philosophical thought written well. You may read my 'the concept of the soul'