True Friendship

Rating: 3.6
You are a great friend
A best friend
I’ll be there when the tears start to fall
And the rays of sunshine hits
We shall play a game of soccer in the rain
We will be friends to the end of time
I’ll be there when you break your knee
When you are to scared to cry
I will be there when time passes by
And I hope you’ll be there to
Sunday, September 18, 2005
Pooka 11 December 2017
Ungrammatical; at least two errors. And ‘when you break your knee’ how often does that happen to test a friendship?
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Paityn 03 May 2018
The phrase is there to show that it's a friendship like that of a child, almost out of a memory.
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Wintersweet Guo 30 June 2006
Hi, Jennifer Hanson, I like many of your poems.Thanks for sharing with us.
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