Thursday, April 24, 2014

Trying To Live Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

Walk proudly and unafraid to the warm shores of the Mediterranean
love home in my big bed to sip a not so sweet freezing cold early morning before dawn
Branches of a tree progressing very slowly
the shadow of my confidant is rippling loudly quickly
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Katerina Kapotas Tapas
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Khairul Ahsan 24 April 2014

Loved this soft, touchy poem of yours. 'Sigh heavily into a pair of strong arms if I fall down and can't find the energy to get up' - A nice thought nicely conveyed. The last three lines are captivating.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 April 2014

live life, wonderful writing, very fine. go on.

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