Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Tug Of War Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a string, a rope, a piece of lace
That calls the shots and reacts to the situations you face

That string is like a spear, a sword, a dart
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Patrice Dixon
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Bethaney Walters 17 December 2009

i love the way you ended this poem. 'why do you torture me so? only you know' a question i rekon a lot of people ask but no one really knows the answer. another thing i love about your poetry is that i can relate to it whole souled, i totally feel it, like its n'sync with emotions ive felt. its great to read the way you describe the emotion you feel, keep your poems coming! ! ! xxx

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Eyan Desir 17 December 2009

A great picture comes to light... well done...

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