Eyan Desir

I liked this poem. I think you have a great way of expressing your words about life. I relate to this as well as many others, I'm sure. I love the words............. Life's celestial shores....... Traps me! Like prison bars...I fall as a victim...To it's bitter roots...Struggling, fighting...then you go one to finish with.....Like birds I fly away..........To a land of gladness......Where joy never ends..............Great ending! ! !

just read i fly away, and maling love, and whats the color of love..all 10s..keep it going

I'm sorry, all you wrote basically were adjectives that were skillfully put together.

i love this poem i give it a 1o vote

love this poem as well

Eyan....a very good poet... I remember the first time I read one of his works before...(smile) and his works now.... Thank you so much for sharing, Eyan and be able to read his book....and actually have a copy of it..which I am very thankful to him....A treasure to cherish Thank so much for your book....I valued it so much...

the ART OF GOLD is very smart...i hope u can earn lots from this..ur book is already leveling up.tho ur first book is already nice but this second one is more upgraded..congratulations to u and ur works ian...I DO HOPE U WILL NO LONGER STOP WRITING POETRY...i lav ur books as i lav ya...smileeeeeeeee

ian, the book''juice of love'' is very nice..aside from it's tidy background, the word ''love'' is really emphasized...world today needs love and respect..i like the contents..all are smartly done..well prepared, nice, clean and presentable..the selected poems are familiarized by the author which has the signature of excellence..thanks for sharing that book my ian..tho we are miles and miles apart, hope respect and love is always wth us..friendship, thats what i mean...don't stop writing since we need you to inspire our work..GOD bless u always, ..just make ur work always nice..thanks a lot my ian..thank you so much...there'll ne no ''me'' if there's no ''you'' here...take care..goodluck for ur next book...lavs ya always...

good work eyan! keep writin n keep sharin!

I really enjoyed the way you ebb, thanks for the stirring ride.{smile}