just read i fly away, and maling love, and whats the color of love..all 10s..keep it going
I'm sorry, all you wrote basically were adjectives that were skillfully put together.
Eyan....a very good poet... I remember the first time I read one of his works before...(smile) and his works now.... Thank you so much for sharing, Eyan and be able to read his book....and actually have a copy of it..which I am very thankful to him....A treasure to cherish Thank so much for your book....I valued it so much...
the ART OF GOLD is very smart...i hope u can earn lots from this..ur book is already leveling up.tho ur first book is already nice but this second one is more upgraded..congratulations to u and ur works ian...I DO HOPE U WILL NO LONGER STOP WRITING POETRY...i lav ur books as i lav ya...smileeeeeeeee
ian, the book''juice of love'' is very nice..aside from it's tidy background, the word ''love'' is really emphasized...world today needs love and respect..i like the contents..all are smartly done..well prepared, nice, clean and presentable..the selected poems are familiarized by the author which has the signature of excellence..thanks for sharing that book my ian..tho we are miles and miles apart, hope respect and love is always wth us..friendship, thats what i mean...don't stop writing since we need you to inspire our work..GOD bless u always, ..just make ur work always nice..thanks a lot my ian..thank you so much...there'll ne no ''me'' if there's no ''you'' here...take care..goodluck for ur next book...lavs ya always...
I really enjoyed the way you ebb, thanks for the stirring ride.{smile}
.. My Definition Of Beauty
Beauty are the roses
Mixed with beauty within
Not just a pretty face
Or pleasures it brings
But lives it beautify
Beauty are the flowers
Blessed with faithfulness
Honesty stains it's plate
Its kindness fills lakes
Its love cannot break
Beauty isn't I love you
But giving love that's true
Beauty isn't sweet words
But words that inspires lives
Beauty isn't what you say
But the way it's said
The rainbows in the sky
The angels from up high
Beauty can lighten eyes
But true beauty lives
Very deep inside
It's grace can bring joy
To Hundreds of hearts.
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I liked this poem. I think you have a great way of expressing your words about life. I relate to this as well as many others, I'm sure. I love the words............. Life's celestial shores....... Traps me! Like prison bars...I fall as a victim...To it's bitter roots...Struggling, fighting...then you go one to finish with.....Like birds I fly away..........To a land of gladness......Where joy never ends..............Great ending! ! !