Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Turnings In Life... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was a child, I wished to become as you people...
not even realizing how stressful the life would be...
I was totally carried away by the nasty freedom they enjoyed.
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Dinu Thomas Kuttamparambil
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and write my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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