Twenty-Four Seven Screens Poem by Debora Short

Twenty-Four Seven Screens

Rating: 2.9


Circling, circling
Insincerities
Hammerhead –ed
Sharks
Thrashing
Splashing
Parodies
Of
Worlds
Sad
Bleeding
Scents
Can’t they
Sometimes
Put images
Of bliss
On those
Re-touched
24/7 screens

(Mountaintop Cottage, Tennessee
~ August 9,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 August 2006

DEB...LOVE YOUR TM STRUCTURE, AS ALWAYS...VERY GOOD USE OF SHORT CROPT DICTION, A LA ABSTRACT -SLANT...THIS PIECE ROX, MY DEAR ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr

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