Monday, December 1, 2008

Twilight (Edward And Bella) Comments

Rating: 5.0

She stared at his face
So soft and smooth
So cold but beautiful
His touch made her shiver
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Noel Horlanda 04 January 2010

Edward and Bella the playful lovers, that I won't forget. Lovely...keep writing but keep the lines full of joys and gladness.

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Nia Riz 17 December 2008

oh...beautiful....just like the movie....i soooo luvd the muvie...such a cute one....roberts eyes were sooooooo loving! ....your poems lines are really nice....a bit of mistakes here and there...but hardly noticed....beautiful Nia Riz

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