Thursday, November 13, 2008

Twisted Love Comments

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I gave you my love and my trust
Then you abused it with all your angry fuss
All your anger left me confused
Leaving me in tears and my body bruised
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teri bronte
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I can relate to this its hurts a lot but its so true.. You put a lot of feeling into this poem that makes me smile for the feelings you wrote.. But you should never give up hope and keep on writing.. Your a great poet... I also love your ending about judgement day a lot of us will be answering to him above and hopefully the ones who break hearts will have to answer for that.. Great piece of work

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Billy Joe Collins 13 November 2008

don't give up hope what a great poem thanks for sharing

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teri bronte

Knoxville, TN
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