Elius Rubby

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Two In One - Poem by Elius Rubby

You sleep, sleep for ever
I disturb you never.
I make a art in my heart
Of your sleepy smile face
Of your cloudy heir cut.

Your sorrow, your suffering
What you see in your dream
Joy & happy that your face told me
I enjoy the beauty of worry & glory
Painting all in my heart paper.

I can do it as I love you deep to deeper.
I want to cry but can't
As you told me always be enchant
I try to smile but also can't
A mysterious feeling heart breaking fun.

I feel you & you also feel me
Face to face but long distance
Heart to heart no distance.
I feel no pain as we're now two in one.
Though you physically gone
Heart to heart we ever have been one.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Summary: It is a dramatic monologue where the speaker (the artist lover) is in a mysterious condition before the dead body of his beloved. He don’t want to disturb her beloved as she is sleeping forever He is outwardly in pain but enjoys the beauty of his beloved smiling face and also enjoys the dream of her afterworld and feels the pain and joyful moment what is seen by her innocent face. The artist forget what he should do “cry or smile “ he want to cry and then want to smile but he neither can cry nor smile and passing a time in a mysterious world funny & cry mixing. They are now face to face but one is alive and another is dead far from the earthly world but he has no pain no worry as in heart to heart they are now so close. They are living in new peace world (water world or sea world) as pearl and cockle and there love will be remembered by all, by the painting story of the artist as the painting story will be kept in the everlasting world (the heart world of beloved) and in mortal world (the heart world of lover) . After her death of world life she has become the spiritual figure and also being united heart to heart by the depth of love. He can paint of all sorrow and suffering, joy and happiness of her beloved in his heart as the heart of artist and his beloved heart get united spiritually. Though the beloved is gone to unknown world but alive in the heart of lover as a sea pearl fairy who provides the inspiration to artist to pain new new story painting to make their love everlasting.

Here sea is consider as the heaven of love which has beginning but has no end and water of sea is represented as unknown world the world after death and pearl is consider as the inspiration of the artist lover.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015

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