Two Virgins Poem by Noel Horlanda

Two Virgins

Rating: 5.0


Burp…buzz… a buzzin’
In the field crisscrossin’
Wild flowers in abundance
Yellow, red, violet in dance
Swayin’, wind whistlin’
Tremulous wings a bustlin’
Yellow black butt in stripes
Long needle strikes
Swive, point too sharp
Trust hard as dart
Virgin to virgin a dockin’
Juicin’ a suckin’
Burp…buzz…buzzin’

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 March 2010

Abstract…nice rhyming 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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virgin to virgin docking, juicing n sucking.. well may be some hidden beauty in it... well done dear

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Ana Zaldivar 31 May 2009

Nice rythm of the words... I enjoyed reading. it feels like a funny song on your head while reading.. something really nice: D

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Noel Horlanda

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Bohol, Philippines
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