Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

Unbreakable Box - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

I still long for you
though you are out of bounds
A ball struck too hard
because fate brought you to me
in a clear unbreakable box
I can see through the plexi glass
and I can hear your voice
sweet voice as well
This is all I can enjoy
I'm afraid
Unless fate brings me a tool to break open this box


Comments about Unbreakable Box by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • (8/27/2005 2:10:00 PM)


    A jump from a struck ball to a box. Work on this one a little, and I think the extra work will reward you. It has potential. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 27, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 2, 2008


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