Unconditional Poem by Adithya A S

Unconditional

It feels like millennium since
We know each other
You are a great solace in time
Several seasons passed with as
Since now I got mesmerized
Maybe we were soulmates
Or may be one soul
Your thoughts twisting my mind
But why it feels so special
May be I am the luckiest
Or the blessed one
I have achieved something
Great in my entire life
I swear this feeling
Will last till my last breath
This sensation is literally unconditional

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poem is beautifully written, and it effectively conveys deep emotions. However, I noticed a couple of small grammatical adjustments that could enhance clarity: 1. Instead of 'Ee know each other, ' it seems there might be a typo. It could be 'We know each other.' 2. In the line 'Several season passed with as, ' it might be clearer as 'Several seasons have passed with us.' 3. In the line 'May be we were soulmates, ' it's more grammatically correct as 'Maybe we were soulmates.' These are minor suggestions, and overall, your poem captures a powerful and emotional experience effectively.
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