Wednesday, July 8, 2015
Unconscious Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Looking out the window but not really seeing,
Sitting in a trance-like state lost in thought.
The rhythm of the rails has a hypnotic effect,
The scenery rushes past and is gone in a flash -
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12/6/2025 10:38:35 AM # 1.0.0
Excellent poem, made me smile at you portrayal of others on the train with you. Interesting look at other people and how we all tend to become unconscious while following our own train of thought. You have succinctly and poignantly shown what is going on around you and detailing it in an enjoyable poem. Enjoyed reading this one! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn