Freddy Ibarra

Rookie - 3 Points (8-23-96 / Texas)

Under The Moons Shade - Poem by Freddy Ibarra

your sand covered smile makes mush out of my chest
holding hands, loving, by the waters edge 
kissing you under the moonlight, I wish this moment never ends 
I never thought id be here with you tonight when we first met
but now I'm for sure that I love you even after my last breath 

making sandcastles out this powdered ground 
you tease me, tackle me straight down 
listening to the oceans sound 
as the music fades from loud
just lay down, and watch the water & the sand makes out 

her temple has me on my knees
I pray to my goddess, I give you all of me 
your radiant eyes is all I see
her body.... is all I believe 
kiss me till I can't breathe...
with my goddess, my queen, my soulmate
for the rest of our days, this memory will never fade... under the moons shade

kiss your forehead, too keep it true
I gave all of myself in you
I lay myself in you...
this beach will never lose its beautiful blue
it's beautiful you
it's beautiful us
it's beautiful love. 


Comments about Under The Moons Shade by Freddy Ibarra

  • (8/20/2012 1:48:00 PM)


    but now I'm for sure that I love you even after my last breath

    This is so nice.
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  • (8/20/2012 10:24:00 AM)


    I reallylike this poem.Beautiful imagery and I agree that the play on words at the end was really nice: D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 14, 2012


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