Sunday, January 13, 2013

Under The Pale Moon Comments

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The lovers stood beneath star lit sky
and let the moments of time slip by
he pleads for her not to go
as the forest's winds began to blow
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Vincent Truong
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Titi Dale 13 January 2013

Wow, great rhythm and rhyming! If this is what you write when you are sad, I wonder what you write when you're happy? Titi

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