Sunday, June 17, 2018

Under The Sea Comments

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U will never understand me.
Never get a second chance.
Don't say you care, cause you don't.
Everyday I'm so sad.
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Lissa Parks
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Aqua Flower 17 June 2018

Swim my dear to the top! Breathe and don't let someone dictate you happiness! The emotions in the poem speak for itself. I would change u to you! In texting it works but with poetry spelling it out, makes a better presentation of the poem. :) Writing is good therapy!

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