Understand Me Poem by ezzabell fanning

Understand Me



inside

bottled up inside
are the words i never said
the feelings that i hide
the lines you never read

you can see it in my eyes
read it on my face
trapped inside are lies
of the past i can't replace

with memories that linger
won't seem to go away
why can't i be happier?
today's a brand new day

yesterdays are over
although the hurting's not
nothing lasts forever
i must cherish what i've got

the hurt i'm feeling now
won't disappear overnight
but someway, somehow
everything will turn out all right

Saturday, April 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: hurting,trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irene Pang 12 April 2008

Congrats! You've managed to use simple words to convey such a deep and profound meaning through! Nice alternative rhyming as well! However, I did notice that 'linger' does not really rhyme with 'happier'... Still, great job =)

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