Andrew D Robertson

Rookie (March 25,1986 / Orange, California)

Undying Love - Poem by Andrew D Robertson

As I looked upon her, the hourglass tipped
And I knew my time was running out.
I lay there, thinking of all the things I could've said,
Somehow, missing the one thing I wished to say.
And as I slipped away into the ever-growing darkness,
I screamed those words I longed to say
Knowing they would never leave my mouth.


Comments about Undying Love by Andrew D Robertson

  • (4/27/2010 1:02:00 AM)


    slipped into the darkness screaming words that never left your mouth. Ouch. I'd have ended up with a limp. Were you standing or laying? A little confused here. An interesting read though. Could probably use a rewrite, but so could everything I've ever scribbled down on a sheet of paper. Thanks for sharing. As always, Keep Writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 7, 2010



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