Thursday, January 1, 2015

Unequaled Questions Comments

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Searching this planetary universe for answers of spirituality
and God, wanting to know everything, leaving nothing unsaid
upon earth about these truths.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 01 January 2015

I like this poem! It's quite convoluted and to say it's complex just mentions the obvious. But that's part of what makes so fascinating to read. If you had just made your basic point in a couple of clear sentences, that point would seem hum-drum. Instead you give us the workings of your mind as it siffs through competing ideas and contrary opinions to rest in what it believes most fervently. By the end your point has credibility because itm has been through a testing process. The key term is A CIRCLE OF KNOWLEDGE but in the end you argue quite clearly after all of the convolutions that knowledge uninformed by faith will always be inadequate. I'm impressed with the energy you display in this poem. It's very convincing as an exercise of the mind.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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