Unfinished Poem by Jo Lee

Unfinished



I can't seem to find
peace within my mind.
This lack of concentration
breaks off my creation.

I sit with an empty hollow look
blank, as an unwritten book.
Despite the words overflowing my mind,
nothing comes out, like they're all confined.

unfinished...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elsa Bennett 19 May 2009

well i think this is an excellent poem considering the subject matter, interesting way to portray it...

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