Wednesday, March 8, 2006

Unfocused Direction Comments

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Blinded by his misery
The path becomes over grown
Where beauty was once seen
Is clouded by the unknown
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Lisa Teres Fraser
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Mickey Pig Knuckles 08 March 2006

Oh Lisa, what a wonderful write you have composed here as this message pertains to so many within our society and You have composed a very meaningful message in poetic form. I like both the style and message you have given us all to read and reflect upon but more importantly you have given us a little of you. Wonderful Poem. As I now close this comment I would ask that you please keep your poetic pens ink flowing across sheets of paper as we your readers eagerly await your next poetic caper. Your Friend, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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