Zander William Pearson

Unity -Part 3- Fire - Poem by Zander William Pearson

Raging through the Earth,
Burning everything in sight,
Fire's untamed fury,
Edges to dominance.

The Earth, it's fuel, let's it's spread,
But Water, it's enemy, extinguishes the flames
Air does not take a side. It can help spread the flames,
or it can blow them to nothingness,

Fire unleashes it's worst,
Feared by many, it's power spreads
Faster than the flames themselves.


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  • (3/14/2010 6:36:00 PM)

    You suggestion is great, but what I was trying to go for was a -ity (or something similar) ending word. Supremacy, Liberality, etc. (I still have to fix 'Emptiness') I might change it though.... I'll think about it. Thx (Report) Reply

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  • (3/14/2010 6:33:00 PM)


    I really like this on! I see now that you're ending each part with a sort of universal NOUN. To whit: Part V, 'Light' - should end with the word 'ETERNITY, ' though I like the flow of 'ETERNALLY' better.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 13, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011

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