Universe Poem by Petra Novakova

Universe

Rating: 5.0


an all-encompassing light
an all-consuming darkness
one and the same
forever inter-twined
in eternity
the stars shine

an un-compromising light
an un-forgiving darkness
equal to one another
forever divided
in eternity
the stars die

and the verse expands

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity,serenity,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2017

an all-encompassing light an all-consuming darkness one and the same.eternity, , shining stars.. void, inability to grasp...... universe, vast, majestic.......well portrayed dear poetess. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Sandra Feldman 27 September 2017

Quite an interesting, poetic and abstract description of the Universe. But the unknown is that way, so impalpably difficult to describe. However, in this poem you create the feeling of what the Universe is in a most effective and talented way. As paradoxical as the Universe may be: 'Forever inter-twined' 'Forever divided' Quite a poem!

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