Sunday, November 20, 2005

Unlived Comments

Rating: 3.0

Too much passed is carried,
Some joy but more hurts.
Hearts filleted over years
Bleeding into the future.
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Kate Hutson
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Naveen Choudhary 20 November 2005

A nice one, try to break it off in stanzas of 4

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Charles Chaim Wax 20 November 2005

what a poem presenting so clearly the great dangers the human faces and then falls such a falling described here sad yet that sadness somehow for the reader uplifting knowing the other struggles a fine poem

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