Unreal Life Poem by Subhashis Pattadar

Unreal Life



When I thought I had wings
And I felt as if I could fly,
I did not know it was a dream,
With dawn which had to die.

When you smiled at me,
Ands everywhere I could see you,
I never understood that
In my life, nothing was true.

It is an unreal life I am living,
All is just but a dream.
No matter how much true
And real it might seem.

Everything that I have done,
Every word that I have said,
Does not matter any more.
Along with the night, it will fade.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 February 2011

Very beautiful poem. But we should get ourselves out from unreal moments as soon as it's possible or we shall be the victim of haunted dreams. Very simple yet bewitching. I liked the poem. Nicely done. Please read my poem 'Let's make a new world' on p.2

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