Unreturned Love: It Eats Away The Soul Poem by Tainted Heart

Unreturned Love: It Eats Away The Soul

Rating: 5.0


I’m locked in a void with no one else
I've given up: Can't save myself
I'm showing the signs but you still cant see
The hopeless creature that has become me.
Darkness presses in and somehow I don't fear
Shadows that haunted me for years


The walls close in and press against me; cold.
For so long I've had to wait
Fighting the shadows, growing old
But now I have surrendered to Fate



You had the time but you just didn't care
That for so long I was willing to share
My soul my life all my few years
The time is gone and now it seems
I'm drowning in my own tears
Smothered by my screams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 03 January 2006

Great poem, but I have to disagree with the guys! You have to deal with it and move on! Everything is for a reason, don't get stuck in a rut and hate love and the world, just because you took the chance and got hurt. Now that really would be a victory for giving in and copping out! Smile in the face of adversity and adversity, will crumble and smile back. 10 for getting it out, Tai

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Caliban's Dream 03 January 2006

been there, got the t-shirt... great poem, touches feelings I had almost forgotten

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Moya Levy 03 January 2006

Sorry by the way, top poemx

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Moya Levy 03 January 2006

Unrequainted love, How it breaks your heart, But not in one foul swoop; No, it's much more painful and hard. You give your heart, Little by little. But instead of yours, Being topped up by anothers, It just shrinks, And dies, And hurts. I've been there mate - it sucksxx

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