Sunday, July 20, 2008

Unseen Tears Comments

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Pain and sorrow build through the years,
Now they slowly show themselves
Through nights of endless tears.
All the feelings I kept inside,
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Rebecca T
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Olubunmi Samuel 07 July 2009

I read your poem but sad to heart. It is indeed unseen tears for real but light will definitely ablaze darkness. keep writing and try call me on my mobile number +2347092023514. There are something that needs to really talk about but not on the internet as regards the improvement on your writing. stay blessed and good job.

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Keith Foley 22 July 2008

way to flow from your heart to paper. hope all is well. best wishes & keep writing.

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