Saturday, December 4, 2010

Unspoken Love Comments

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Wakes up each day to the soothing voice heard,
Spending every moment dreaming more and more,
Listening to all chit chats, arguments and laughs,
My days are spent on you, did you know that?
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Ama Ratnayake
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Adeline Foster 04 December 2010

Exceptionally written. Some grammar tweaks necessary but the thoughts are well expressed. The trick ending is great. Adeline

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