Friday, July 1, 2011

Until He Appears Comments

Rating: 2.7

Just one person required to think me amazing,
just one voice desired to whisper I make him
crazy, only one pair of arms for a feeling of
sweet romance, as I listen entranced to the
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Margaret Alice Second
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John Richter 01 May 2015

Oh, how I would dearly love to be that one for you, sweet Margaret Alice 2nd..... Your words are so lovely. As a young man - bachelorhood - sometimes I would dream about who my future wife would be. Unfortunately I can not be your 'only one' because there are three of us trapped in my body. Frankly, I think the other two are butt-heads. They're liars too so don't believe them if they tell you they are alone in here..... I think they only like you because you are pretty. And honestly your poetry is way better than theirs. They just want to use you so that you will write poetry about them. (They smell bad too.... the one guy never showers....) Anyway, I hope that I made you smile today because poems like this one certainly deserves a smile....

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