Until My Breath Is Gone Poem by ALI RIAZ

Until My Breath Is Gone



My open eyes always wish to see you—
Even among thousands in the crowd,
There is no wrong
In knowing your soft sounds,
There is no wrong
In reading your sweet smiles,
There is no wrong
In hearing your heartful words.

Something made me tremble—
To wander through an unknown transit,
Hoping your moon-like face
Would appear before me,
While roses begin to spread their scent.

Crowds of countless bees,
Crowds of countless butterflies—
All come to welcome you.
Yet I am afraid,
When I lose you every night,
In every passing day!

I know,
You may never return.
Still, I have kept my journey unfinished—
Kept it unfinished,
Kept myself alone,
Kept myself in quiet calmness,
Until my eyes close,
Until my breath is gone,
Until my breath is gone.

Monday, December 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 19 December 2016

It is a beautiful poem that tell such a deep of heartfelt and great choice of words, i can feel how dark the feeling is by just reading this poem. I know its a sad poem but the poem was done beautifully as if we feel it.

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