'Untitled' Poem by Thomas Adams

'Untitled'

Rating: 4.5


Those very stares begin at dawn and winter has a hold.
I frown the gust across the lawn, not bundled for the cold.
The passive change I might subject is subtle say the least.
For saving me has churned awhile by mother and her priest.
To see this world but black and white would frighten me a bit.
I'd frolic round more aimlessly and have no time to sit.
I fear to add some color here might bind me in the cost.
Until the day togetherness would cure my being lost.

Thursday, July 25, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thomas Adams
The Postaster Jul/2013.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Michaelle Yarbrough 25 July 2013

I like the poem. It is well written and had nice flow. The rhythm and rhyme are very nice

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