Wednesday, May 24, 2006

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Rating: 4.5

A young soul caught in the hands of fate.
It couldn't havce been stopped; it was way too late.
A gun, his best friend
Soon became his untimely end.
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Meagan, this is heart-renderingly beautiful. And gets the point, and to the point, and to the emotions also; and in a well-crafted piece, I think. I think any reader would want to reach out and hug. Can I suggest that you spell-check and grammar-check through the future pieces that I, for one, would like to see posted by you?

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Meagan Miller

Meagan Miller

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