Thursday, May 4, 2006

Up On A Bridge Comments

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Up on a bridge looking all the way down
Wondering if I jump could I float to the ground
The flow of the wind is such a beautiful sound
Up on a bridge looking all the way down
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***** ********* 05 May 2006

This poem has a beautiful flow and a very sensitive edge to it Seamus. Let me assure you, you won't float down, it is however a great view to take in the world from. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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Seamus Shaneous

Seamus Shaneous

Levittown, PA
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