Seamus Shaneous

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  • Jasmine Raspberry (2/23/2007 12:47:00 PM)

    I love this poem and it really touched me. You did a great job and i never heard anything like this before. Wow this was the best piece of poetry i have ever read. I just can't get enough of your peotry. I have read this poem over three times this is really great.

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Best Poem of Seamus Shaneous

Lord Save Me

god please forgive me for the things that i do
the ways i live life and the paths that i choose
for the people i see that are left for the grave
for the one love i lost and the girls that i've played
only you can judge me and punish my ways
i'll suffer whats coming and try to be brave
i will never doubt you because i bow to my knees
your my only savior and you i try to please
though i have never met you, your power is strong
lead me the right way and out of the wrong
for there are times i have sheltered and acted so weak
but your feeling was with me it is very ...

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I Miss You

how much i really miss you
i could count a million ways
i don't get to see you much
but i'm thinking everyday
you and i have such a bond
nothing can even compare
in your face there's such a spark
i just can't help but to stare
when you left i lost a part