Upon The Cross Poem by Connie L. Burchett
Upon The Cross
When I look upon the cross
this is what I see; the lamb
of GOD who came and died for me.
Even Though I scorned and mocked
HIS name; HE still gave His live for me.
It my my sins and transgressions that
nailed HIM there.
HIS body was broken; HIS blood ran
free while HE hung upon that cross;
with tears in HIS eyes and HIS arms
stretched wide HE said 'Come unto me.'
HE paid the price and HE gave HIS all
as HE hung upon that cross;
do you know? HE did this all for me.
April 1,1999
He gave his life for me, not he gave his live for me! :) get it? :) A great poem, otherwise, eh? :) I'd have to give it a ten, I'd have to say! :) Michael Gale. I'm going to vote it a ten! :)
Nice poem, but the words need to be changed! :) The whole second verse needs to be reworded! It should read He gave His life to Me, not he gave his live, for me! :) See, your wording sounds improper, no? :) also, it's not It My my sins, it should read as it is my sins get it? :) Other wise it is an awesome write, Don't You think? :) Please have a nice day! Connie L. Burchett! :) I absolutely hate autocorrect, Don't You? :) Please have a very happy day! Michael Gale.
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 7:49:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
5th line is wrong, he gave his life, not live for me! just trying to help! please read my poem upon the cross! your poem is nice! !