Thursday, May 31, 2007

Upon This Rock Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll build my house upon this rock.
I'll build it with some sturdy blocks.
Then each block I'll lovingly place,
to strengthen my foundations base.
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JoAnn McGrath
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 June 2007

Great poem JoAnn... Life must be bulit on solid Foundations.. 10

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Alison Cassidy 03 June 2007

There's somthing incredibly reassuring about the metaphor of the rock - something biblical too! A simple piece penned from truth without pretension. love, Allie xxxx

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Marci Made 31 May 2007

I hope 'your house ' survives as long as this lovely poem will, forever........some of us have walls crumbling down all over...[ps hard to find ones poems with all THE WASTELAND STUFF being submitted.~~~~~~~~~~~ marci.xo

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