Thursday, February 18, 2016

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Glorify thee inspirations with laced stars,
For they think nothing but the safety of dawn.
Rough surface of hands be softened.
Falling sweat under the sun be wiped.
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Rondel Forjes
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Chinedu Dike 08 March 2016

A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned in poetic diction with spiritual insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Rondel. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 February 2016

When shall the little bird realize this thing? Is it when the time already reached their time? Or, Is it when our ideas already reached the edge of conscience? a very nice poem...........with lots of images. thank you very much. tony

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