Vanity Inoculation Comments

An excellent heavy metaphored poem, laden and layered. Brillianly worded, Kevin. I have enjoyed very much

2) I have read and understood I find it a bit scary, not those carcasses, but the ashes.....BUT you wrote a sparkling poem in the dark light, this poem so bright, for the disadvantaged honest citizens. Thank you so much for sharing, dear Kevin.

1) Doesn't the norm apply here: the teacher is the sufferer? or: the poet is the source of all first beginnings of wrong thinking? Or is this poem really therapeutic?