Malaya Roses

Rookie - 77 Points (16/12/ / Malaysia)

Venom - Poem by Malaya Roses

Rattling snake or mamba's black
Once bitten
You must have few shots
To fight a venomous disaster
You are bound to say yes for venom
To counter bites
You need more venom than average.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Venom... bad or good.. act will determine the result.

Comments about Venom by Malaya Roses

  • (6/22/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    very true, thank you for sharing this good poem (Report) Reply

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  • Hans Vr (5/23/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    Dear Rose, there is real power in posiitive thinking.
    I am not so sure any human needs the venom
    Anyhow, powerful poem around a fantastic theme
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 23, 2012

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