Violence Poem by Jacob Andrew Jarman

Violence

Rating: 5.0


violence of the past
lingers in my mouth
I spit it out
yet it remains
dominating my senses
a blade the trigger
releases the shadows
haunting my dreams
my tongue tied
this smile fake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent James Turner 24 June 2009

not a bad little rant, i am not sure whether this is yet a poem but there are some nice wording in this, i am not an expert in spelling or grammer but i think there should possibly be a comma in this little section a blade, a trigger regards V

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