Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Virginity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Virgin explosion to me unclear
Perhaps it was a nuclear
Feeling the jolts of your curvaceous frame
Orgasms will never be the same
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 May 2015

this poem is nice; but the pain and joy of loss of virginity seem to get smothered under the weight of rhyme...

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Gordon D Wilkinson

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