Visitor Poem by Parameswaran K V

Visitor



A ray of light

seeping through the window

stood on the floor

bewildered-

as if it forgot

the things to say which

it came all the way.

Monday, May 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 15 May 2017

Great use of personification. It is very common for a man to forget certain things (like you open the refrigerator and forget what you came looking for) but 'A ray of light' forgetting? Unbelievable. Thanks, Parameswaran.

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Parameswaran Kv 16 May 2017

Thank you very much! Imaginative transformation of an ordinary sight into a poem.

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