Vodka Lady Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Vodka Lady

Rating: 5.0


You still want more of less
Especially the forty.
Do you speed through the rest
To reach the forty at the bottom,
And race through dignity and respect
To reach the blinkers
Lying in the dregs?
Ex is the forty of exist,
But that's the bit you dance with,
Spinning like a fairground waltzer
While the outside doesn't matter
When it's blurred and far away.
You'll fall so far when it stops.
I know what you'll land on
And how few hands to help you up.

Sunday, August 31, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: respect
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 26 September 2008

This is a personal, well written and imaged piece of poetic prose. Keeps the reader on their toes, as to who and when. That's the mark of a good writer. A ten from me.

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