I feel light, empty in my soul
No reason to reason a full thought
Life treats like a blazing coal
Making the void even more.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
With small grammatical refinements, this poem becomes much stronger and clearer. It has Comparative Clarity Issue. Making the void even deeper. Making the void even more intense.it is my suggestion
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