Void Poem by John Dave

Void

Rating: 4.8


I feel light, empty in my soul
No reason to reason a full thought
Life treats like a blazing coal
Making the void even more.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem expressing a emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

With small grammatical refinements, this poem becomes much stronger and clearer. It has Comparative Clarity Issue. Making the void even deeper. Making the void even more intense.it is my suggestion

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John Dave 12 January 2026

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