Void Poem by John Dave
Void
I feel light, empty in my soul
No reason to reason a full thought
Life treats like a blazing coal
Making the void even more.
With small grammatical refinements, this poem becomes much stronger and clearer. It has Comparative Clarity Issue. Making the void even deeper. Making the void even more intense.it is my suggestion
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2/18/2026 11:18:06 PM # 1.0.0
Light like a blazing coal, great imagery but a blazing coal also gives significant light and heat to the void!