Tuesday, January 6, 2026
Void Comments
Rating: ★4.8
I feel light, empty in my soul
No reason to reason a full thought
Life treats like a blazing coal
Making the void even more.
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Rajendra Prasad Meena Jaipur India
11 January 2026
With small grammatical refinements, this poem becomes much stronger and clearer. It has Comparative Clarity Issue. Making the void even deeper. Making the void even more intense.it is my suggestion
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1/28/2026 5:56:47 PM # 1.0.0
Light like a blazing coal, great imagery but a blazing coal also gives significant light and heat to the void!