Void Poem by Montaha Gasir

Void

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A hole,
A dark, empty place.
Alone,
A suffocating space.

Stuck in this pit,
Scared and shaken.
I'm fighting the feeling,
Of lost and forsaken.

Lonely in the dark,
My demons whisper.
I try to quiet them,
But my mind becomes twister.

An ache inside,
Grows more and more.
Pushing me down,
Till I'm on the floor.

The cold ground,
My only companion.
This place is a ditch,
But it feels like a canyon.

Vast and vacant,
As my internal cavity.
Do you sense,
My situation's gravity?

I'm screaming,
But you can't hear me.
I'm breaking,
But you can't feel me.

What will it take,
For you to see me?

Tuesday, November 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,sadness,loneliness,depression,alone,broken heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ashutosh kumar upadhyay 18 November 2022

fantastic...nicely written... very much emotional piece....

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Montaha Gasir 18 November 2022

thank you very much

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