charles hariyadi leonhart

Rookie (21-03-1990 / Indonesia)

Voir - Poem by charles hariyadi leonhart

From deep inside someone heart......
there's always hole
making the fear
if someone steep in hopes...
it always comes....
to stop the melodies in it.....
tears of fear
like the
winter drops the snow........
group of holy wishes that comes with the warms..
you must always hopes.....
pray for yor family
to becomes the melodies....
that always bring love...

-love is like the snow drops in the warms hand-

Comments about Voir by charles hariyadi leonhart

  • (4/30/2006 11:58:00 PM)

    So, you're new to poetry. The very best thing you can do right now is to read every single poem you can get your hands on, then read them again, and again, and again. After that, start writing again.

    My one tip for this poem: kill the ellipses'. Please.
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  • (4/15/2006 12:31:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem- keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 22, 2006

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