Voyage To The Destiny Comments

She vanished suddenly as she had once appeared.. As a pearl, most distinguished and unique... Abandoning me there... A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. in the last but one stanza you become vry positive about her and finally ends up saying that she vanished. playing with emotions..love and heartbreak pictured so well my dear poetess thank you very much. tony

A beautiful poem on love and heartbreak.

This reads like a case study of two girls who complemented each-other after their initial hiccups. And Lo! When they became good friends, the girl who entered the narrative somewhat later, just disappeared leaving the other in a shattered state of mind. This throws light on various aspects of human psychology. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, Shilpa. I was, once content with life full / when I met her...Imperfect she was... I too was not more / perfect, and longed to / give her company

As a pearl, most distinguished and unique... Abandoning me there... A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. these lines are really very poetic lines....... she suddenly disappeared and your expressions are wonderfullllllll. thank you dear poet.

@Shilpa Chaganti The last two lines of your poem are excellent! 'A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. '